We made changes to the narrative:
- Zoe enters Summer's room, and after pulling back the bedcovers finding Summer gone she looks around the room and also looks around the house for her.
- Realising she has gone, she sits on the stairs and starts to panic.
- The house phone rings. Zoe jumps up and runs down the stairs to pick up the call.
- Answering the call, Zoe will shout "Hello?! Hello?! Who is this? What have you done with her?!"
- We will have an initial establishing shot when Zoe enters the room. We will pan across the room, following her movement.
- The camera will remain stationary in the hallway while Zoe looks around the house for Summer.
- We will have an CU of Zoe panicking on the stairs.
- LA when Zoe runs down the stairs to pick up the ringing house phone
- MS of Zoe on the phone to the anonymous caller.
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